Weekend Writing Warriors 8-Sentence Sunday #10
It’s been a busy week and it’s only going to get busier as we head out to spend a week with Grandboy and Son and DIL. Can’t wait to get my Nanny hands on that sweet baby! He’s growing up so fast, I can hardly stand it.
I’ve been offering snippets from my two WIPs for last nine weeks, so for week 10, I thought I’d do something different and give you 8 sentences from my published novel Rule Number One, which is available at Amazon and Barnes&Noble both as an e-book or in print. The book blurb is “Decorator and home stager Katy Ruth Gilligan has sworn off men. She’s been married to two no-good cheating weasels, so when handsome book publisher Jack Walsh shows up on her doorstep and pretends to be her hired escort, she’s not one bit amused. Jack’s back home from traveling the world as a journalist, ready to take over as CEO of his family’s publishing business. Not only does he want to hire Katy’s firm to renovate his family’s historic building, he’s also very interested in exploring the attraction between them. At first, she’s humiliated and furious, but the job will put her on a fast track to success. Despite the fact that she’s drawn to her new client, Katy’s determined to protect her heart. Can Jack convince her that the third time’s a charm?”
This snippet is the first eight sentences in the book:
“You’re late.”
She didn’t even say hello when she opened the door. Jackson Walsh stepped back. She was unbelievable! Tall, probably about five nine and curvy—like Marilyn Monroe or Jennifer Lopez curvy—bosomy, wide hipped, and…delicious. A woman you just wanted to strip naked and ravish. Her eyes were huge and dark brown, they reminded him of rich chocolate. Jack felt those eyes all the way to the center of his soul, but that wasn’t where the feeling was manifesting.
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16 Comments
ED Martin
What a sexy start!
Nan
Thanks, ED
Elaine Cantrell
This drew me in right away.
Nan
Thanks, Elaine!
Teresa Cypher
haha! Nice, Nan. “… but that wasn’t where the feeling was manifesting.”
Very visual. Well done!
Enjoy your time with that little guy 🙂 !
Nan
So glad you stopped by, Teresa! Already having a ball with him–he’s so sweet!
Ella Quinn
That’s putting him stright. Great beginning. Tweeted.
Nan
Merci, Ella! Thanks for coming by!
Veronica Scott
Love the tone of this, really makes me want to continue reading for what happens next! Terrific snippet!
Nan
Thanks, Veronica–this one’s available on Amazon. Enjoy!
Linda Morris
Well, you already know how much I liked this book. Have fun with the Grandboy and post more adorable pictures!
Nan
Thanks, Linda! You’re a sweetheart! Will post pictures all week–he’s irresistible!
Gemma Parkes
Great description and l love that last line! Beautifully written and a great opener.
Nan
Thanks, Gemma!
Shannyn Schroeder
Hi Nan, great snippet. I like the premise of the book. I love a guy who’ll pretend to be a hired escort just to be with a woman. 🙂
Nan
It was a fun book,Shannyn–you can get it Amazon!