Weekend Writing Warriors 8-Sentence Sunday
I’m back, Fellow Warriors, after a glorious week’s vacation at the lake. This snippet is from my upcoming novel Sex and the Widow Miles--one of the first two books in the Women of Willow Bay series, releasing on September 26. We’re back with Julie and Will again. They’ve finished dinner at her apartment and are sharing a chocolate molten lava cake for dessert. Chocolate, whipped cream, and Will make for a hot situation for Jules, but she’s managing to bluster her way through it. They’ve been joking together about who is the most devoted chocolate fan and she finds another opportunity to remind Will of the difference in their ages, but Will is taking charge:
“My boy, never ever try to best a menopausal woman when it comes to chocolate. Didn’t your momma ever teach you that?”
He grimaced at me around another mouthful of cake, swallowed, and then said, “Um, Jules.” He reached across the counter. “You’ve got a little whipped cream…uh…” With a quick swipe of his finger, he snagged a fluffy dot that had somehow ended up on the end of my nose and then brushed it over my lips.
My tongue slipped out to catch it, but caught his finger instead. He lingered there on my lower lip, which trembled when he touched it.
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14 Comments
Ann Swann
Yummy snippet – in more ways than one!
Nan
Thanks, Ann!
Susan Stuckey
Delightful snippet — go Will … very clever of him. Nicely done. Great 8.
Nan
Thanks, Susan! Will is one of my favorite guys!
Skye
Okay, now I want chocolate lava cake with whipped cream.
A side of Will wouldn’t go amiss, either. 🙂
Nan
Hey, Skye! Chocolate lava cake is delish–and even though I invented him, I think Will is too! Thanks for coming by, baby!
Veronica Scott
Love this little moment! Can’t wait to see what happens next – terrific snippet!
Nan
Thanks, Veronica! So glad you came by!
Marcia
Aw, I can guess where this is going 😀 You’ve got just enough tension here. I hope she gets over her worry about being the “older woman”.
Nan
She probably will, Marcia! She probably will! Thanks for stopping by!
Millie Burns
Um, now I’m licking my lips…
Nan
Great reaction, Millie! Thanks for coming by!
Gemma Parkes
That’s lovely, what a tender yet exciting moment!
Nan
Thank you, Gemma! So glad you stopped by!