Nan Reinhardt, Author

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Weekend Writing Warriors 8 Sentence Sunday #2

February10

I got such a terrific response last week, here’s another eight sentences from Like Fine Wine. Julie is getting settled into her friend’s apartment, but the guy across the hall is more than a little distracting. In this scene, he’s stopped by to see if she needs anything from the market before the snow storm that’s due, and Julie catches herself being…well…distracted…

I leaned against the sofa, arms crossed under my breasts, simply gazing at him. I was frozen there, unable to respond, my mouth as dry as a desert. Was I actually lusting after a guy who’s practically a stranger? And almost young enough to be my son?

Yep. Desire curled in my lower belly, although it had been such a long time, I barely recognized the sensation. Blood rushed to my cheeks and my body warmed as I stared at him standing there in Liam and Carrie’s living room, looking like an MTV beach party host.

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14 Comments to

“Weekend Writing Warriors 8 Sentence Sunday #2”

  1. Avatar February 10th, 2013 at 12:00 pm Skye Says:

    Wow! Just Wow!


  2. Avatar February 10th, 2013 at 12:54 pm Nan Says:

    Thanks, Skye! Hang tight…it’s got some surprises…


  3. Avatar February 10th, 2013 at 1:13 pm Teresa Cypher Says:

    Excellent! The visual I got was outstanding, and you tucked in a lot of information without it seeming obtrusive. Nice job!

    “…MTV beach party host.” Love it!


  4. Avatar February 10th, 2013 at 1:57 pm Nan Says:

    Thanks, Teresa! This is so much fun! I’m really enjoying participating in WWW!


  5. Avatar February 10th, 2013 at 4:40 pm Veronica Scott Says:

    Interesting and I liked the subtle point about the MTV beach party host as well…will be fun to see where this goes next. Terrific snippet!


  6. Avatar February 11th, 2013 at 12:04 am Nan Says:

    Thanks for coming by, Veronica! Appreciate your interest in Like Fine Wine–more to come!!


  7. Avatar February 10th, 2013 at 6:28 pm AJ Bradley Says:

    Wow! As a 38 year old, I totally get that I’m-too-old-to-be-attracted-to-this-person sense. This made me smile, I hope to see more next week!


  8. Avatar February 11th, 2013 at 12:03 am Nan Says:

    AJ, Julie is older than 38, but remember, love is ageless–as is lust, apparently! 😉 Thanks for stopping by!


  9. Avatar February 10th, 2013 at 8:15 pm Kate Warren Says:

    Lust is ageless, and based on the visual you gave us, who could blame her? 😉


  10. Avatar February 11th, 2013 at 12:02 am Nan Says:

    It is indeed! Thanks for coming by, Kate!


  11. Avatar February 10th, 2013 at 8:33 pm Liz Flaherty Says:

    LOL–I just keep saying the same thing, don’t I? But it does sound so good!


  12. Avatar February 11th, 2013 at 12:05 am Nan Says:

    Hey, Liz! So glad to have you in my corner! I’m glad you’re enjoying it!


  13. Avatar February 14th, 2013 at 7:38 am Chris Kelworth Says:

    Yup, he’s definitely a distraction! Thanks for sharing


  14. Avatar February 15th, 2013 at 3:30 pm Nan Says:

    Thanks, Chris! So glad you came by!


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